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雅思考官:如何写出满分小作文?丨附考官满分范文+构题思路

很多亲学生总觉得小作文20分钟就能写完,
相比起来也没有大作文那么难,
往往就忽略了小作文很多关键的得分点。
今天就来听Vicky娓娓道来……
来说说Task 1里面的大小坑!


隐藏陷阱 
雅思小作文的题型一共就那么几种,有时间的同学其实都可以提前准备。
毕竟同一种题型所用到的关键词,句式都是差不多的。
但是你知道task 1里面隐藏的  在什么地方么?
考官到底喜欢看什么样子的文章,哪些内容是必要的,哪些内容优势画蛇添足,倒扣分的,你有没有自己挖坑给自己跳?


视频没字幕?懒得看?

没关系,Vicky直接给你总结出来了!

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影响Task 1的关键Tips 

① 字数请控制在170-190 words 
什么是Inforgraphic?
Inforgraphic = information + graphic 
把信息+图表转述成文字表达出来,就是task 1 的要求。
官方要求是150字,如果确实无法在150字内完成,
那么请至少控制在170-190字。

② 不要写个人意见 

IELTS 是英语考试,不是智力测试,
并不需要给出你的意见,分析,预测,意义等等……
即使你是相关方面的学霸,考官也不需要任何个人意见

 
不要用 I, Me, We...等第一人称 

这是图表的信息,而不是你看到的“图表信息”。

直接用it 或者用chart来客观表达就好,
千万不要说,我看到怎样我任务怎样

④ 小作文要写的精炼浓缩 
任你妙笔生花,不如简单陈述。
小作文不是写记叙文,没必要绕着弯的写,
只需要你用词够精准,句式够精炼。
所有的 report 不外乎如此。


⑤ Introduction 学会用两句话搞定 
Introduction只需要1-2句话
1句话改写题目,1句话告诉别人这篇小作文是在说什么。


⑥ 注意找不同,差异点才是 key point 

无论是哪种图表,一定要注意横纵坐标轴单位以及范围
指出最高点&最低点
如果是表格的话,标题是什么一定要说清楚。

描写图表的时候不要以为每个点都说才是细节,挑重点才是王道
从小老师就教育我们不要写流水账,task1 也是一样,写成流水账是没人看的。

另外,如果是比较特殊的流程图,
那么开始和结束是关键
其中的转折点或者关键步骤也是重点。


⑦ 要趋势描述,不要流水账 
文章字数限制,所以要精简,要学会归类,找出趋势。
用同一模式概括多个信息,不需要把不重要的信息逐一描述。

如果把相似的描述重新说一遍,除了有凑字数的嫌疑以外

考官会觉得你没有语言概括能力。


⑧ Conclusion 结尾可有 

小作文的结尾段其实是可要可不要的部分,
因为因为文章主体就是高度总结性质的文章,
所以task 1没有结尾段也是不会被扣分的。

附考官满分表格题范文+构思过程:

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

构思过程:

1. I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing the question.

2. I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobacco category has the hi ghest percentages, and leisure/education has the lowest.

3. Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something to say about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information you select; everyone will do this differently.

4. I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey has the highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy has the highest figure for clothing/footwear.

5. So, I'll write a paragraph about Turkey and Italy.

6. My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and Sweden.

7. Maybe I'll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first category, Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the lowest figures for the first AND second categories.

8. I don't need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trend in point 2.

 

满分范文:

The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.

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