“为什么我已经说得很流利了考官不理我?”
“为什么我跟考官聊得很开心还是没高分?”
“为什么我的口语万年5分?”
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给大家爆料过考官提供的每个分数段视频实例,
今天给大家看看雅思官方公布的越南考生口语考试过程,
后附考官点评!
觉得自己明明可以过7最后却只有5的各位亲学生,
赶紧来看看是不是你和她存在一样的问题?!
Topic:
An interest or hobby you enjoy.
在看官方点评之前,
先来温习一下雅思评分标准:
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点评以上视频的考官,
也是从雅思考试的评分标准出发的。
▶流利度&连贯性
“This candidate is able to maintain the flow of speech for the most of the time, but there arehesitation as well as some repetition and self-correction. ”
考官表示,总的来说,这位越南考生还是可以hold住整个回答的~但是呢,过程中总是停顿、用词重复和反复自我纠正。
“This ,together the fact that she describes several interests rather than one interest, makes her hard to follow at times and leads to some loss of coherence.”
在描述这个topic的时候跑偏了~她说了好几个兴趣,而不是一个兴趣。(题目中说的是an interest or hobby),从而导致她比较难展开这个话题,更影响了整个描述的连贯性(coherence)。
“She can use markers accurately but within a narrow range.”
在她的表达中,可以适当用上很多标志性的连接词,来让自己的描述有逻辑、成段落:
first
so
because
as well
in the future
...
比如↓↓↓
Candidate:Before when I live in Vietnam I often go to...church and some association...er...I can...er...I often ask my friend to...er...to contribute...er...er...and I give a hand to help the poor people...or the old people because I think the old people are so...er...my...is look like my grandparents so I want to take good care for them
▶词汇多样性
“She rather limited range of vocabulary is just adequate for this part of the test. Shemanages to talk as some length about these familiar topics and produce some good items”
虽然她的词汇量有限,但在测试中也能做到尽量延展此话题。
比如↓↓↓
Candidate:
widen my knowledge...
to overcome or try to get over the problem....
contribute...
take good care....
“She makes some errors in usages.”
不过,也出现了一些词汇用法错误。比如:do volunteers...
▶语法多样性及准确性
“She uses a narrow range of sentence patterns,but there are a few instances of ‘if’ and ‘when’ clauses.She produces basic structures with reasonable accuracy but verb tense errors and omissions are frequent”
她用了太多短句,虽然尽力在用“if”、"when"来举例或拓展,虽然尽力做到有基本的句型结构,但在时态的使用上错误明显。
I can shopping...
before I live in Vietnam I often go...
in picnic...
I enjoy with it...
▶发音
“She has quiet strong accent with a number of poorly formed sounds and systematic omissions of word endings.”
有严重的口音……而且。。口音严重到很多词儿都听不清楚了。比如:Iee a han 其实是在说→‘lend a hand’
“Rhythm is often syllable-timed and utterances are sometimes delivered too rapidly, which causes some difficulty for the listener.”
考官明确表示:说话的节奏非常重要,如果过快,会非常难听清楚。
所以,觉得自己明明可以过7却只有5的亲学生们,
对照自己赶紧自评一下,
没把握的话,不要任性复议哦!