听不清?没关系,以下是听译文字版:
Vicky: Wow我们的考官大聊天来到第二期,今天谈的话题是每个同学都会中招的Hometown-家乡。Hi, Gary!
Gary: Hi, Vicky.
Vicky: Wow,Nice to see you again~
Gary: Unm~ nice to meet you
Vicky:Let's talk about the hometown, right? If I answer the question the hometown in this way, what score will u give me?
Vicky:Um, I grew up in Hangzhou, which is a really stunning part of South China. It’s the capital as well as the biggest city in Zhejiang province. Both the local and immigrants love the city for its ancient history, the fabulous west lake, cultural heritages and also the booming economy. And I love my hometown very much.
Gary: Wow~ that’s wonderful! That's 7.5 to 8. I wish all answers like that. Unfortunately, most student just give very basic detail, and always just talk about how old the city is, and a bit about shopping, nothing else.
Vicky:Oh, thank you so much!好~大家看到了么?刚才的答案我说的分数是7.5
听完Gary说的话,你明白 Hometown 的关键点在哪了么?
如果你还不知道怎么说,那么往下看↓高分答案哦~
Gary 高分答案:Hometown
I was born and raised in Beijing, China, which is one of the largest cities in the world by population, home to approximately 21 million inhabitants. I have attended kindergarten, primary,middle and high school in my hometown. There are various districts that span an area of approximately 17,000 square kilometers, each connected by acomplex web of public transportation.
薇评: 1. 第一句话回答相当精彩,“which…..““home to….”将几个句子合并在一个句子里。特别是“…..whichis one of the largest…..”非限制性定语从句的使用,对于描述家乡话题第一句话很关键。 2.“approximately”副词使用加分; “inhabitants”代替people 或者population; “span”比cover高出几个档。 |
Beijing is massive world-class city that is attractive to not only people from numerous parts of China but citizens from countless nations as well.City life is bustling and lively, with a huge number of sitesof interestfor residents and tourists alike. The people arefriendly and compassionate, assisting strangers when they require it.
薇评: 1. fairly 放在形容词前加强语气, “非常”“相当”的意思; 2. spacious可以甩big这样的单词几条街; |
The best part of my home is undoubtedly my bedroom since I can fully unwindwhile lying on my bed. After a tough day of studies, relaxing on my bed canconsist of using my computer or playing with my smartphone. I can also realize a sense of privacy and spend quiet time alone to consider the events in my life.
薇评: 1.首句包含两个语法结构:定语从句, not only….but….并列结构; 2. 这段答案的形容词较多 ,“numerous”,“bustling”,“lively”,“friendly”,“compassionate”,都属于加分亮点词汇,建议熟记,此类话题中尽量用到这些单词。 |
Atthe moment, Beijing is famous for being the host of the 2015 WorldChampionships in Athletics, hosting a range of events in track and field.The vast list of tourist attractions are perennially popular including Tiananmen Square, Temple of Heaven, Forbidden City,Summer Palace, Ming Tombs and Great Wall. It is also well-known formodern architecturesuch as the Bird’s Nest, Water Cube and MasterCard Center.
薇评: 1.首句用到了分词结构“ ……hosting arange of events”做独立主格结构。 2.同义词的替换,a range of和a vast list of…. 3. perennially “持久地;永久地”这个单词在口语中出现绝对让考官吃惊。 |
Living in my hometown is quite delightful due to the vast array ofactivities available. I am familiar with a range of restaurants, offering delicious foods, and entertainment districts, making me relaxed and enjoyable. In adition, my family members and friends are here, which provids me a sense of homeliness and consolation.
薇评: consolation 表“安慰”,动词形式为console,在口语中这属于高级词汇。 |