&考官Gary的真实对话
听不清?没关系,以下是听译文字版:
Vicky:Hello,各位同学大家好,今天要给大家介绍一位非常著名的雅思口语考官。然后跟大家聊一聊口语考试的话题。
那么, 今天要讨论的是什么话题呢? 那就是口语考试的开篇话题 house or flat。 很多同学在说这个话题的时候会不小心步入陷阱,所以我们就来跟Gary聊一聊。
Vicky:Hi,Gary~
Gary: Hi,Vicky~
Vicky: Talking about the topic which is house or flat, what are the common mistakes the student usually make?
Gary: Well, examiner is looking for the age of the apartment, the size of the apartment, it's the modern look or traditional apartment, it's bright or it's dark?
For many students, they just give us a list of room, and talk about the neighborhood they are surrounding, which is extremely boring, and then we give them low score.
Vicky: OOOH! That’s terrific, I think everybody should know this; it's a very valuable tip
听完Gary说的话,你明白 house or flat 这个topic该怎么答了么?
什么?你说光有思路没素材不顶用?
好吧,Vicky我偷偷放出Gary给出的考官版范文给你们素材:
Gary 高分答案:House or Flat
I currently live in a three-bedroom, seventy square-meter apartment located in the city center of Beijing. My flat is situated on the tenth floor of a twenty-story building, surrounded by a supermarket, bank and primary school. There arevarious rooms including a living room, dining room, kitchen and bathroom, not to mention a balcony.
薇评: 1. 同义词的转换:be located in和be situated on,避免词汇重复运用; 2. 过去分词、现在分词的灵活运用:located in the city….,surrounded by,including a living room; 3. 副词currently为加分词汇。 |
My apartment is very warm and gives my family members and me a homelyfeeling. It is fairly spacious and allows me to have freedom to do anything that I want to do. For instance, I can watch TV in the living room, relax in my bedroom or have a nice warm shower in the bathroom.
薇评: 1. fairly 放在形容词前加强语气, “非常”“相当”的意思; 2. spacious可以甩big这样的单词几条街; |
The best part of my home is undoubtedly my bedroom since I can fully unwindwhile lying on my bed. After a tough day of studies, relaxing on my bed canconsist of using my computer or playing with my smartphone. I can also realize a sense of privacy and spend quiet time alone to consider the events in my life.
薇评: 1. undoubtedly,fully用在句中属于加分词汇,注意带有感情的重读此单词; 2. unwind 心情放松,比“relax”更地道的表达; 3. a tough day 痛苦的一天 |
I much prefer to live in a house due to the fact that it is more spacious and private. As opposed to living in an apartment, it is less noisy to live in a house and people may not feel crowded. In addition, houses can give a homely feeling and their communities tend to be safer.
薇评: 1. due to the fact that…..替换“because “ “since”这样的表达; 2. as opposed to…..与….相反 |