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Task Two
Task Response
addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others
presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive
presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear
任务回应6分要求考生首先要完成题目中所需要回答的问题但段落比例不太平衡，然后提出相关的立场但是对于立场的找到的观点总结有的不够清楚地表达或者出现重复性的表述， 最后需要有相关的中心观点，但并没有充分和清晰地展开。
备考计划：
1. 按照“科技”“ “政府” “教育” “环境”“ “媒体” “文化” “老年人”话题整理相关考题， 要熟知历年雅思考题各主题的考题内容 （可参照环球雅思写作教材基础段）
2. 每个主题看三篇范文，整理出范文中的观点和思路，可以结合老师课堂上的主题讲解， 一定要记下常用的角度。 例如科技类话题可以总结为：
科技的优点：
Bring great convenience to daily life
Enhance work efficiency
Enrich entertainment life
Deal with the problems that cannot be solved by human beings
Reduce labor costs
科技的缺点：
Discourage individual activeness
Pose a threat to health
Be harmful to environment
Lead to unemployment problem
Cause safety problem
3. 根据相应观点找到例子。
Coherence and Cohesion
arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression
uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical
may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
uses paragraphing, but not always logically
前后文衔接和语言连贯性6分要求考生要清晰和连贯地组织信息和表达观点，有效运用衔接词和短语但出现一些错误和机械化使用， 同时要特别注意段落安排，但有可能缺乏逻辑性。
备考计划：
1. 看“状语从句”的语法相关资料，按照例句造句，因为状语从句就是逻辑关系表述。
2. 按照3大文体结构 agree or disagree, discuss both views, why and how to solve it 分别看三篇范文，总结段落安排的结构，包含每段段首句和段内的衔接词，之后各写一个自己的作文模板。
3. 参照考官范文熟悉展开论点的方式，通常为因果关系。
Lexical Resource
uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task
attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy
makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication
词汇6分要求考生要有足够的词汇，而且可以使用不常见的词汇，允许有词汇和词构成方面的错误，比如词性，但不能阻碍理解。
备考计划：
1. 每个主题看两篇范文，整理出相关的词汇， 再配合主题词汇的总结查漏补缺， 整理过程中一定要注意记下词汇的词性避免出现使用不当。
2. 在做剑桥阅读题目的时候，看到相关写作主题的文章时，注意积累相关词汇以及替换词，尤其是动词的替换。
3. 在查阅生词的时候，一定要查字典，把字典中的例句抄下来，利于熟记词汇的词性。
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms
makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce
communication
语法6分要求考生要运用简单和复杂句，允许有部分语法和标点符号的错误但是不会影响理解。
备考计划：
1. 熟记简单句和从句的使用，在看语法讲解时一定要抄下例句，根据例句分析语法，包含如下语法:
被动语态
情态动词
定语从句
表语从句
宾语从句
主语从句
状语从句
同位语从句
现在完成时和过去时
2. 每种语法看完要分别造4句话，确保正确使用
3. 根据各个主题的常用观点分别选3各观点进行展开论证， 然后进行语法批改。
（由孙笑飞老师提供） Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Individuals have been for years arguing which would be the best way to improve public health – by building more sports facilities or seeking other measures. As for me, although sports facilities can make people healthier, I think that simply relying on this is not enough. There are several reasons why some would argue for building sports facilities. Firstly, young people can be encouraged to walk out to take physical exercise instead of sitting in front of the screen by easy-to-reach sports facilities. Secondly, different people would be able to find sporting activities which are suitable to them. For example, opening sporting field can be used by the young to play basketball or football; fitness facilities built in community are popular among the elderly who enjoy warm-up exercise. However, it should be noted that such sports facilities would be mostly used by those who are fit already. So, we must seek some other ways to improve the overall health of people. To begin with, children should be educated about taking daily exercise at an early age instead of sitting in front of the computer or TV set all day. Besides, adults should be encouraged to abandon some bad living habits, like smoking, alcohol abuse, skipping breakfast. Moreover, sports facilities can hardly help to deal with some problems of mental health. Given that some young people today suffer daily stress, governments would be well-advised to pay attention to the mental states of stressful group of people, by providing professional consultation of psychology, if in need. In conclusion, given the arguments discussed above, we can arrive at a conclusion that takingsteps toward health requires collective efforts. Building more sports facilities is simply part of this before we achieving the final goal. | ▼ |
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